What's changed?
I have added an extra line to my introduction in order to give people a clearer idea of what my double page spread includes. I then made my text smaller to make the magazine look more professional, this then left me room to make an extra paragraph to inform readers about the subjects up coming album, which the article is about. All of these changes also make my magazine look professional. I also decided to add the "Photography and Article by Rebecca Browne (Executive Director) to make the DPS much more professional and so the audience can refer to who wrote the article for future reference and possibly take interest in their other work.
I decided to make few changes due to the positive response from my class peer assessment.
After gaining some teacher feedback I decided to make my font smaller ad add an extra paragraph into my interview to fill the page more. I also added a quote into the bottom right of the page in order to fill up the page and make my double page spread more professional.
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