Before submitting my final version I made a number of changes to my first draft suggested by my peers and Helen. Firstly I added a banner to the top of the page, this follows the banner on the double page spread and also allows for more cover lines on the page so readers can geet a deeper insight into what the magazine entails. I then put the main image of my model in front of the masthead to show that this is the most dominant image on the page and because it's a typical magazine convention meaning it looks professional. Finally, I then added a puff to right hand side of the page as Helen said this would look a lot better and catches viewers attention better than if it was amongst the cover lines like before.
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